tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post2668014006420198189..comments2011-05-02T01:46:59.895-04:00Comments on the whisper: The Servant and the Magicianthewhisperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13649931721147977082noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-72118049774100237742008-08-28T09:39:00.000-04:002008-08-28T09:39:00.000-04:00Hey thanks!I don't think we've met before... My na...Hey thanks!<BR/><BR/>I don't think we've met before... My name's Kaeli, lol.thewhisperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649931721147977082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-77283573278492462422008-08-28T00:08:00.000-04:002008-08-28T00:08:00.000-04:00wowowowow!! so cute is NOT the word I would use to...wowowowow!! so cute is NOT the word I would use to describe it. :) But I do love it and think you have some serious talent! your writing style is fantastic, and I love the way you used the image of the creepy magician... he kind of reminds me of someone from a Ray Bradbury book. Great job!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10540885249502679470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-74773100694560114782008-08-27T16:09:00.000-04:002008-08-27T16:09:00.000-04:00Gross. "Cute" was used twice, almost three times. ...Gross. "Cute" was used twice, almost three times. I DID NOT WANT IT TO BE CUTE! Gahhhh.thewhisperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649931721147977082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-12631011206043676762008-08-26T23:22:00.000-04:002008-08-26T23:22:00.000-04:00When I first read it I thought that the Magician w...When I first read it I thought that the Magician would be God. It was pretty cool the way you snuck the tent with the Servant in there. (That makes me think of a mewithoutYou song that says, "If I could become the servant of all with no lower place to fall.") I really enjoyed that. It was... eh... well for lack of better words, "cute." Either way, nicely done.John Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15729722474508031089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-44090908367814201092008-08-25T17:16:00.000-04:002008-08-25T17:16:00.000-04:00when did you start writing?!you should definatly w...when did you start writing?!<BR/>you should definatly write more<BR/>& more & more :)<BR/><BR/>ps. i read this at like 2:30am haha.<BR/>i have internet on my phone so i got<BR/>off my comp & logged on my cell &<BR/>read<BR/>it & feel asleep in bed lol.. it<BR/>was a nice good night story hahaPoems of Long Agohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08510736202118083597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-35661432682050923092008-08-25T17:14:00.000-04:002008-08-25T17:14:00.000-04:00oww, i love analyzing things!but this was like fla...oww, i love analyzing things!<BR/>but this was like flat out line<BR/>for line very creative.<BR/>what i liked was the fact that you<BR/>wrote it to be about God & us & our<BR/>daily interactions with Him.. but<BR/>this might blow you away a bit, im<BR/>kinda a sci-fi dork(uhh actually<BR/>alot lol!!), i could totally see<BR/>this being a hit script for a movie<BR/>of thiers. seriously! it could be<BR/>writen all futuristic & turned<BR/>all trippy. its really nice & i greatly enjoyed reading another<BR/>young ladies creative work.<BR/>& im glad to see that your writting<BR/>& such.. you should blog everyday.<BR/>im a fan of that. i actually only<BR/>started blogging like in may.<BR/>i have loads of awesome poems on that thing since then.. you should press the 'older posts' button &<BR/>read my ones further back. i have<BR/>a gazillion more on my facebook.<BR/>ive only been writting since the<BR/>end of sr. year. i took a creative<BR/>writing class & found out i could write & liked it lol. i also have a few short stories on my page. mine are very graphic & such. i am<BR/>a decently versitle writer. which i like that alot.. i can write about blood & guts, love & lust, sci-fi & real life, nature & abstract. its my number one passion(next to space).Poems of Long Agohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08510736202118083597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-69052315873645008602008-08-25T10:00:00.000-04:002008-08-25T10:00:00.000-04:00sweet! you picked up what i was putting down.as i ...sweet! you picked up what i was putting down.<BR/><BR/>as i was writing it, i knew in my mind who the Magician was, but he kept reminding me of we think of God as sometimes (like you said). but then i realized that that is sort of the deceit that a magician would use so it worked out.thewhisperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649931721147977082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-75381598401370554292008-08-25T05:42:00.000-04:002008-08-25T05:42:00.000-04:00haha, i won't say it was cute, then.Actually, I lo...haha, i won't say it was cute, then.<BR/><BR/>Actually, I loved the story because of the irony that permeates it. Many think that we as believers view God as the magician who is never to be questioned. And honestly that is sometimes how we act. <BR/><BR/>But that couldn't be further from the truth. I loved the depiction of the Servant, that is the God we love because he first loved us. <BR/><BR/>Amazing story.uthpastorjjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18009088991613983666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-85111888186910992222008-08-24T23:56:00.000-04:002008-08-24T23:56:00.000-04:00it wasn't supposed to be "cute..."eh, oh well.it wasn't supposed to be "cute..."<BR/><BR/><BR/>eh, oh well.thewhisperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649931721147977082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5570683425106450124.post-64835120935270586442008-08-24T23:46:00.000-04:002008-08-24T23:46:00.000-04:00aww that was cute. gave me nice dorm room reading....aww that was cute. gave me nice dorm room reading. =] thanks<BR/><BR/>good job girlJayseekaaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18224442612266072809noreply@blogger.com